Monthly Archives: December 2013

HOW TO WRITE GOOD

HOW TO WRITE GOOD
(for Maia, age eleven)

Granddaughter I might say
read some Ernest Hemingway

A good place to start might be
“The Old Man and the Sea”

Watch how he draws arrows
pointing to an empty space
until a picture appears

If we’re going to know it
you’re going to have to show it

And if you want to say you’re sad
don’t say you’re sad – that’s bad

Try something like –

She came home after the spat
didn’t even say hello to the cat
Threw herself down
and cried her way through
two
pillows
and a mattress
until the drops began to fall
on the head
of her sister in the lower bed

GOOD GRIEF

GOOD GRIEF

And this, children, is the skull of Lucy
three million year old ancestor of us all

(If you can believe
anthropologists without bibles)

Who lifted the very first football
at the very last moment

so the very first Charlie Brown
could miss and fall on his bottom

After three million years
Charlie is still the hero of the piece

Never letting experience
change his trusting nature

FLUFFY

FLUFFY

I’ve looked at clouds from both sides now
Joni Mitchell

Pilots who fly in mountains
talk about
clouds with hard centers

People who fly computers
talk about clouds
with soft wise centers

Lovers lying in the grass
see them friendly fluffy floating by
now a puppy now a kitten in the sky

If Joni is right, and she’s usually right

The other side may be faster and harder
hunkered down in a bunker
all gathering all seeing all knowing

You thought you were watching a cloud
the cloud has been watching you